The Firewall Saga - Chapter 15

Read the full first draft as it first appeared on my blog at [link]

I am actively seeking beta-readers to help me work through the second draft. I'm particularly interested in people with a keen eye for grammar and punctuation. If you are interested please send me a note and I will add you as an editor to my fastpencil.com project so you can review the current draft.

I am also looking for artwork to illustrate the chapters. Get in touch if you want to contribute. I will pay commissions.

Please let me know what you think of the story so far in the comments as I love feedback, doesn't matter if it's good or bad.

here is chapter 1

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and here is the gallery of all chapters posted so far.

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